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Thursday, December 13, 2012

Early Version of Amderesta The 4th Republic #3.

I came across an email I sent myself back in 2006 which had early versions of my writing which appear in their current form in my novels Amderesta The 4th Republic #2, Amderesta The 4th Republic #3, and Amderesta The 3rd Republic. This beginning to my novel Amderesta The 4th Republic #3. The Colonization is completely different than the handwritten version which is also the one used in the published version of my book.

Amderesta: The 4th Republic #3. The Colonization

by Daniel Zazitski

Chapter 1

Two weeks after the unconditional surrender of the Second Southwest

Amderestan Military Republic Defense Force, President Tenlon sat in the

Level 1 breifing room with Jason Ancalin,director of the Amderestan Census


President Tenlon said,Director Ancalin,I would like you to conduct a

census of the population here in the Amderesta galaxy."

Director Jason Ancalin repiled,"Very well,Mr. President.I'll contact

the state level agents."

Meanwhile on Base Matilda 4,the ship commanders of the 5th Amderestan

Spacefleet Corp Combat Assault Starfleet were assembled in the level 15

breifing room.Commander Rochester stood from his chair to address the group

He said,"Thank you for coming here.As you know,Atorsia 7 Medical Center

recieved alot of damage during the war,so half of the medical officers

are being given temporary assignment at Atorsia 7 Medical Center for 4


Brigadier General Jonathan Lencon asked,"Who's getting temporary assign-

ment from my crew."

Commander Rochester repiled,"Doctor Reynolds,Doctor Christians,Doctor

Anderson-Lencon,Doctor Sanders,Doctor Williamson,and Doctor Conells.

They'll be leaving tommorrow morning at 0300 to go out with the Alantina's

Medical personnel to Atorsia 7.The other personnel will have four months

of leave coming up.Your Engineering personnel is being temporarly

assigned to Base Epilison 1 for a two,and a half year period to conduct

repairs to the base caused during the attack by the Yenturians three years


Ten minutes later,everyone left,and Jonathan walked out of the room. He

stepped into the corridor,and walked over to the central turbolift.

He opened the doors,and walked inside.The doors closed,and the computer

asked Jonathan to select a level.

"Level 1,"Jonathan said,into the computer's voiceprint command comm system.

The turbolift went down to level 1,and the doors opened.Jonathan walked

out,and he proceeded towards the virtual reality simulation room.Just

then,Sargeant Willis stopped him.

Sargeant Willis said,"Sir,the virtual reality simulation room is under

-going a level 3 system scan.You can use the one on port side.Which

program were you planning on running?"

Brigaider General Jonathan Lencon said,"The Amderesta 1-J attack in


Sargeant Willis repiled,"That one is very popular,sir.I'm on my way to

the recreation room to play Holographic War with Lt.Williams.

Our charactors are Spacefleet Combat Assault Force commanders.Our CAF's

are currently attacking the RDF along the border.Lt.Commander Gregory

is sending three corps to assist our CAF's.I better get going,sir."

Sargeant Willis walked down the central corridor to the Recreation

Room.At the same time,Brigaider General Jonathan Lencon walked into

the Port Virtual Reality Simulation Room.The doors closed,and he looked

around at the simulated bridge,and crew.Lt.Mark Haleson sat at the Flight

Control Console,and he looked out at the empty area of space bordering

the AMR-controlled Swearian region.Just then,Cheif Warrent Officer

Johnny Lencon saw three AMRA approach the ship on an attack vector.

He said,"Scanners just picked up three AMRA destroyers crossing the

treaty boundary.They are on an attack vector.We should go to battle

stations,and Code Red Alert,sir."

Lt.Colonel Christopher Lencon activated Code Red,and Battle stations alerts.

The wall indicator lights lit up red,and the alarms started blaring.Lt.

Just then,Brigadier General Jonathan Lencon's VAC beeped,he removed it,and

Commander Rochester's image appeared on the screen.

He said,"Lencon,I want your remaining personnel to proceed to the Swearia

System,and give aid to the Spacefleet personnel assigned to Planetary Base

Delta 22-E thirty sectors north of Swearia City.You'll leave at 2000 hours


Jonathan asked,"Sir,how long is our deployment?"

Commander Rochester repiled,"Five months,afterwards Commander Crentuin will

be giving new assignments."

At 2000 Hours,Brigadier General Ralph Lencon rotated his command chair to

face Lt.Commander Williams.

He said,"Williams,prepare for departure."

Lt.Commander Williams repiled,"Aye sir."

Lt. Ansign activated the Video-Audio Communicator,and said,"Base Matilda 4,

this is Amderesta 1 ASC-1737-K requesting clearance to depart."

Traffic Control Officer Locsan's Voice repiled,"Amderesta 1 ASC-1737-K you've

been cleared for departure from Level 1 Docking Bay.After departure remain at

1/4 Sublight Speed until you reach the outer marks,then increase to Hyperlight."

Lt.Ansign said,"Copy that Traffic Control,1/4 Sublight until outer markers."

Captian Williams activated the ascent thrusters,and lifted up Amderesta 1 off

the Docking Bay floor.He then activated the main thrusters,and proceeded at

1/16 Atmospheric Cruising Speed.The Space doors opened,and Captian Williams

flew Amderesta 1 through the Atmospheric Shield.He slid the speed controls

foward,and increased speed to 1/4 Sublight Speed.When Amderesta 1 reached the

outer markers,Captian Williams increased speed to Hyperlight Speed 22 in

Hyperlight-Sublight Intergration Mode.

Brigaider General Jonathan Lencon rotated his Command Chair to face the

Flight Control console where Captian Williams sat.

He said,"Williams' what's our ETA to Swearia?"

Captian Williams repiled,"24 hours at present speed,sir."

Meanwhile in ADF governed Calron City,Commander Locais,Defense Force Governor

of Calron State sat with his State Ministers,and the Senator representing

Caloron 1 in the Amderestan Senate.

He said,"Census Director Harrisan,The ACA is conducting a census of

Amderestans living in the Amderesta galaxy,and they want you to conduct it in

the southern Alazenia region."

Down in the street below,an Amderestan Security Force Checkpoint was set up

outside of State Executive Building.Five Officers with laser rifles patrolled

the main street for suspected SSWAMR colaberators who hadn't given alliegence

to the 4th Republic.Just then,a civilian speeder approached the checkpoint.

Colonel Harrison motioned for the speeder pilot to stop.The speeder pilot sped

up,and he flew by the checkpoint at a high rate of speed.Colonel Harrison

removed his VAC from his utility belt,and set it to Alpha Priority 7 Channel.

Colonel Harrison said,"Attention,Amderestan Security Force,and Calron State

Civilian Security Force.A green Episilon Class Speeder flew by my checkpoint

outside the SEB at a high rate of speed,ACS1.Be advised,there maybe

Colaberators for the former SSWAMR in the speeder."

Back on Amderesta 1 ASC-1737-K,The Bridge personnel sat at their duty

stations.Captian Williams turned around to face Jonathan.

He said,"Sir,Engineering says they can increase HSIM to Hyperlight Speed 25.9

by increasing the SIF Generator fifty percent."

Brigadier General Jonathan Lencon repiled,"Very well,I'll have Engineering

modify the SIF Generator."

Over in Engineering,Engineering Officer Hensan went over to SIF Generator's

Computer Control Console,and he increased the output level by 50 percent.At

the Hyperlight reactor Control Console,Lt.Warris appiled the SIF output level

increase to the Hyperlight reactor's programing.Afterward,he went over to

Chief Engineering Officer Warrens.

He said,"Sir,we can increase to 25.9."

CEO Warrens repiled,"Very well,Warris."

Back on the Bridge,Captian Williams slid the speed control lever up to Hyper-

light 25.9.

Captian Williams said,"Sir,we should arrive in the Swearia system in 20 hours

,and 45 minutes."

Meanwhile on Troop Transport Epsilon,Cheif Engineering Officer Warrens went

over to the Flight Control Console.Warrent Officer Hensan turned his chair a-

round to face CEO Warrens.

He said,"Sir,the Commanding Officer of Base Episilon One reports their Main

Power systems have failed in Levels 2 through 6,and 11 through 16.Auxillary

Power in those Levels are at 56 percent.Secondary Power conduits were shorted

out,and need replacing.The Main Computer Generator has failed,and Auxillary's

at 10 percent.They have Weapons,Scanners,Shields,Communications,and Life Support set to MAM."

20 hours later,Amderesta 1 ASC-1737-K established on orbit around Swearia.Lt.

Ansign contacted Swearia Traffic Control on the VAC.

He said,"Swearia Traffic Control,This is Amderesta 1 ASC-1737-K requesting

clearance for Atmosperic entry,and landing."

A Swearian Traffic Control Officer repiled,"Amderesta 1 ASC 1737-K,you are

clear for atmosperic entry,and landing on Landing Platform Sigma 5.Remain at

1/16 Atmosperic Crusing Speed until you reach 11,000 feet."

Captian Williams entered Swearia's atmospere at 1/16 ACS,at 11,000 feet,he in

creased speed to 1/4 ACS.Captian Williams landed Amderesta 1 on Landing Platform Sigma 5.He deactived the thrusters,and got from his chair.

Brigadier General Jonathan Lencon said,"Computer,this is Brigadier General

Jonathan Lencon,authorization Alpha 322156-Episilon-78,Security Access Alpha

Priority One.Take Bridge Control Consoles offline."

The Computer Voice repiled,"Bridge systems offline."

Jonathan,and the bridge personnel walked over to the Starboard Airlock Corrider Access Junction.

Back on Crescent,ACA Director Ancalin handed a datapad to President Tenlon.

It read:

Offical Census Report

1.Figure from 90,000 Census:35 Trillion

2.Figure from 90,010 Census:95 Trillion

President Tenlon said,"My office is recieving reports of food,and medical

shortages from thousands of systems.There are 10 unihabited galaxies in the

NDEGs.I'm proposing the colonization of those galaxies with the extra 60 tril

-lion Amderestan citzens.I'm also increasing the status of the Northern Dwarf

Eliptical Galaxies Protectorate to a colony."

12 weeks later,A fleet of Colonial Transport Vessels assembled 50 light-years

from the northern galactic edge of the Amderesta galaxy.The vessels held the

60 Trillion Amderestans,and suppiles to inhabit the northern 10 Dwarf galaxies

in the NDEG.

On the Genesis,Commander Asalin contacted the other CTVs,He said,"20 Billion

people will be settled on each planet with suppiles,Power Generators,Communi

cation Generators,and Temporary shelters.

Friday, November 23, 2012

Kobo Books in Indie Bookstores

Hello everyone here is another blog post. This month I have been participating in NaNoWriMo for my second year and I currently near 45,000 words on my scifi I am currently writing right now. Earlier this year, I read several articles and stuff online taking about a number of independent bookstores selling Kobo ebooks through their websites.

Since all nine of my Amderesta The 3rd/4th Republic books and Onmibus have been self-published through Kobo Writing Life, indie bookstores such as Aunties Bookstore, Penguin Bookshop, Prince Books, The Regulator Book Shop, Otto Bookstore, Bookworks, Watchung Booksellers, Tome On The Range, Mendham Books, Sundance Books and Music, The Bookworm, Red Ballon Bookshop, Left Bank Books, Fact and Fiction, Forever Books, Snowbound Books, Saturn Booksellers, Jaberwocky Bookshop, Viewpoint Books, Lift Bridge Book Shop, The Country Bookshop, and others are selling the Kobo versions of my books on their websites which I will link to below

All of my ebooks published through Kobo Writing Life can be read on any ereader that supports the epub format such as Kobo Reader, Barnes and Noble’s Nook and many other ereaders with the exception of Amazon Kindle. Also you can read my Kobo books on as many devices you want to. Also Kobo has free apps for PC, Mac, Android, iPhone, iPad and other computing devices if you do not own an ereader.

Since tomorrow is Small Business Saturday, support small businesses like the bookstores I have listed here in my blog post and indie authors like myself by either purchasing my books, by the way Amderesta The 3rd Republic is available for free through Kobo and/or giving word of mouth.


Thursday, November 15, 2012


This is my second year of participating in National Novel Writing Month, as you may already know if you follow my twitter, liked my Facebook page Amderesta The 3rd/4th Republic Series which this blog is posted to. Basically the purpose of NaNoWriMo is to see if you can write a 50,000 word novel between November 1st and November 30th. Right now, I have written 25,000 words on the novel I am working on for this year’s NaNoWriMo which will be added into the first book in my Amderesta The 3rd/4th Republic Series, Amderesta The 3rd Republic once I finished writing it.

Friday, October 5, 2012

10th Amderesta The 3rd/4th Republic Book

I am currently in progress of writing the tenth book in my Amderesta The 3rd/4th Republic Series which picks up directly from the ending of Amderesta The 4th Republic #8. The Amderestan-Analkian EGA War. Since characters in later books of the series make references to events which occur in earlier books, you should read start with Amderesta The 3rd Republic and follow with Amderesta The 4th Republic #1 through Amderesta The 4th Republic #8 in that order. I have the first seven books available as an Onmibus if you like to read them as a single volume.

This book will continue my current story arc that started in chapter 2 of Amderesta The 4th Republic #7. Basically the 4th Amderestan Republic is entrenched in a civil war with the Swearia Tourist Parisia Liberation Army who wants to gain control of the Taronia Region, Tourist Region, Swearia Region, and Parisia Region. As of the beginning of Amderesta The 4th Republic #9, STPLA has been dealt a major blow in the Taronia Region thanks to Jonathan Lencon who commands Amderestan Military forces there. However, things for our protagonists will get pretty interesting as thing progress in the writing of this book. I’ll be posting segments as I write them to Wattpad, if you like to read them.

Wednesday, September 12, 2012

Planning a prequel Series

In addition to the currently eight book Amderesta The 3rd/4th Republic Series which will be a nine book series when I finish writing Amderesta The 4th Republic #8. The Amderestan-Analkian EGA War, I have starting on a five book prequel series that is set before before Amderesta The 3rd Republic. The five books in the prequel series set before the Amderesta The 3rd/4th Republic Series will have an interconnecting plot that directly ties into events of Amderesta The 3rd Republic and cover the backstory to events that occur in the aforementioned book. Obviously, there is the issue of internal continuity relating the eight soon-to-be nine books in the Amderesta The 3rd/4th Republic Series that will have to be dealt with as I work on the prequel novels. I am considering the possibility of serializing the Amderesta The 3rd Republic Prequel Series on Wattpad as I write it and let you read it in installments until I've finished writing each book. So, I'll have plently of writing to do once Amderesta The 4th Republic #8 is finished. My website will have excerpts from each of the prequel novels as well. Thanks to everyone who has gotten a copy of my books in Onmibus format or seperately, you can leave your feedback on my Facebook page Amderesta The 4th Republic to which my blog post will be posted to. Daniel

Tuesday, August 14, 2012

Continuity Issues While Writing an Ongoing Series

Right now, I working on four books that are connected to the Amderesta The 3rd/4th Republic Series. I'm writing the ninth book which continues the events from the end of Amderesta The 4th Republic #7, a prequel: Amderesta The 3rd Republic: The Vellans Adminstration which details events leading up to Amderesta The 3rd Republic's prologue and I am writing two concurrent books which covers a 22 year period after the Second Third Republic-AAR War depicted at the beginning of the prologue. The thing here is keep all of the storylines straight as I jump back and forth between writing each book that's currently under production. Some authors outline the plotlines of their books, while I choose to write by the seat of my pants. Thanks for reading this blog post. If you like to get any of my books, visit my website at there you can read also read excerpts from my books as well. Also, leave me any comments you may have. Daniel

Monday, August 6, 2012



This is a three minute sample of the upcoming audiobook version of Amderesta The 3rd Republic which was recorded by ACX narrator Scot Wilcox. In this scene Jonathan Lencon has returned from investigating the BSI bio-weapon facility on Allian to met with the Amderestan Senate's Defense and Intelligence Committee.

Tuesday, July 24, 2012

Audiobook Adaptation

Right now, I am working with a narrator through Audiobook Creation Exchange (ACX)to create an audiobook version of the first book in the Amderesta The 3rd/4th Republic Series. Under the ACX Agreement entered into by my narrator, the first fifteen minutes has to be uploaded to ACX pending my approval or suggestions for changes by September 30 2012. Once I give approval for the first fifteen minute segment, my narrator is bound by the aforementioned ACX Agreement to record the entire audiobook by December 31, 2012. Once the audiobook version of Amderesta The 3rd Republic is available for purchase from, Amazon, and through itunes, any royalties will be shared between myself and the narrator.

Wednesday, June 27, 2012

Review of Collapse by Richard Stephenson

I finished reading the Advance Review Copy of Collapse which was sent to me in electronic format by Richard Stephenson who is the author of this book. The book follows three main characters, Howard Beck, Richard Dupree and Maxwell Harris.The plotlines that are present throughout this book can almost be found in your newspaper or on the internet. If you like reading novels written by Tom Clancy and simular authors, I recommend you get a copy of Collapse to read on July 6th. If you like to read the first seven chapters, you can download a preview from Smashwords via this link: Colapse will be avilable from Amazon and Barnes and Noble in Paperback and ebook versions on July 6, 2012
Richard Stephenson is a US Army veteran who served as a MP before becoming involved with Federal Law Enforcement. His oldest child who has Asperger's Syndrome inspired the character of Howard Beck in Collapse who also has Asperger's.

Monday, May 28, 2012

My Recommended Reading Order for the Amderesta The 3rd/4th Republic series

If you haven't read any of the eight books currently avaialble in the Amderesta The 3rd/4th Republic series, they are meant to be read in chronological order starting with Amderesta The 3rd Republic followed by Amderesta The 4th Republic #1. The NDEG Mission, Amderesta The 4th Republic #2. The SSAAR-Yenturian-Amderestan War, Amderesta The 4th Republic #3. The Colonization, Amderesta The 4th Republic #4. The Bytoris Plague, Amderesta The 4th Republic #5. Operation Retribution, Amderesta The 4th Republic #6. The Alien War/Amderestan-EGA War/Army Command and Amderesta The 4th Republic #7. Return to Civilian Control. I am currently in the process of writing the ninth book in the Amderesta The 3rd/4th Republic series along with a prequel to Amderesta The 3rd Republic. The series is intended to be read as an ongoing serial , i.e each book continues the storylines of the previous book in the series. The eight books currently available in the Amderesta The 3rd/4th Republic series can be purchased individually or in an omnibus from amazon sites in the United States, UK, Germany, France, Italy and Spain in paperback versions printed through CreateSpace and kindle verions. This blog post like my others is linked to my facebook page:, so if you are on Facebook stop by my page and leave your comments concerning my books, thanks. Daniel

Friday, March 30, 2012

My Review of Eternity by Casey S Townsend

Eternity by Casey S Townsend is the first book in a four part series, which deals primarily with Red Horizon, an underground resistance group fighting to overthrow the Roth who have taken over and forced everyone to worship Roth. I'm not going to spoil the book for those of you who haven't read it, but I'll say this Eternity is an awesome book and I'd recommend to those who are fans of dystopian fiction. You can listen to a serialized audiobook version of Eternity peformed by Casey S Townsend available for free on and through itunes. The ebook is available from smashwords, amazon, and Barnes and Noble. There is also a paperback version of Eternity now available through Createspace and Amazon as well.

visit for more information on the Eternity series and to join the Eternity Fan Club

Wattpad version of Amderesta The 4th Reoublic #1.

Currently I'm in the process of typing up the second book in my Amderesta The 3rd/4th Republic series, so far I'm currently typing up the eighth chapter. Chapters one through seven have been serialized on wattpad if you are interested in reading it. Here is a link if you like to check it out and leave any feedback. Since this is the second book in the Amderesta The 3rd/4th Republic series, I suggest you purchase my book Amderesta The 3rd Republic and read it first as it gives the backstory to Amderesta The 4th Republic #1. The NDEG Mission. The books consists primarily of two major storylines, the 5th Amderestan Spacefleet Corps Combat Assault Fleet's combat assignment in the Northern Dwarf Eplitical Galaxies and the SWLA Rebellion continuing on from Amderesta The 3rd Republic (This particular storyline is concluded in Amderesta The 4th Republic #2.) I hope you enjoyed reading my upcoming book and I look foward to reading any comments or feedback you might have. Daniel

Sunday, March 18, 2012

Serialized Novel

Right now, I am currently in process of typing up my novel Amderesta The 4th Republic #1. The NDEG Mission which is the second book in my Amderesta The 3rd/4th Republic series. Thanks to everyone who has downloaded the Kindle versions of my books. They are available in paperback format as well. Amderesta The 4th Republic #1 which was originally written in longhand is currently being serialized on wattpad as I type it up. Check it out and leave me your comments on it.


Monday, February 13, 2012

Writing Update

With the publication of Amderesta The 4th Republic #2. The SSAAR-Yenturian-Amderestan War and Amderesta The 4th Republic #3. The Colonization, I am now concentrating on typing up Amderesta The 4th Republic #1. The NDEG Mission on my laptop. So far I'm typing up the third chapter of my book. If you like to read the first two chapters, they are posted on Wattpad. Just type Dan1986 into the search and you should find it.

Also, thanks again to everyone who has downloaded the Kindle versions of my Amderesta The 3rd/4th Republic books. If you enjoyed reading them, I love to read your feedback on them on my facebook page Amderesta The 4th Republic, or on Goodreads.

If you haven't read any of Stephen Jennison-Smith's books yet, I recommend you download them to your Kindle and read them. Let's just say that his books have a Monty Python style of humor that will make you want to read more.